Hello friends, favour to ask, could somebody please proofread my manifesto...

Hello friends, favour to ask, could somebody please proofread my manifesto, I've done it myself from when I last posted it but I'm sure I can't have got everything. Also evidently I am grammatically spelling retarded so I probably fucked it up some.

Pretty please gomrades

well that seems difficult

its not that long it will take you maybe half an hour also its mostly done I just need another set of eyes

there's no link

oh lol I was waiting for someone to say yes. Are you offering?

oh well I guess so

Thank you friend.

Its more pages now but that's just because I used 1.5 spacing. Also the presentation is still not complete but another comrade said he would make it sexy for me so I'm leaving that up to him. I just don't want to send him it riddled with spelling errors and such

I wonder if Marx or Nechayev would've posted their manifesto online

can't be bothered, someone tell me what's it about

literally the first word is wrong my dude

I kind of have a headache, I'll try get through it when I get through it

Nechayev was a nut and his methods failed.

I have absolutely no doubt the commie manifesto would have been all over the internet had Marx had the ability.

Its 20 minutes reading. If that. Anyway I'm loathe to put a TLDR here in case people just read that instead of reading the manifesto.

Basically I want to combine the expansion of co-operative social enterprises and situationist protest and disruption into a unified revolutionary machine, which will gradually buy up everything.

This is why I need proof reading. Thanks anyway