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Unofficial Sonic Storytime: Hedgehogged #2
Xavier Gutierrez
Carter Jones
>>129125053Last time on Hedgehogged, everyone's fighting Eggman's saiyan mech and Rage is inside it and collecting the chaos emeralds from all the deities that live in them. Finitevus is the deity of control.
Jace Barnes
>>129125053>The Council being helpful. It still feels like bullshit.
Jace Anderson
>>129125095Fini being a pain in the ass as usual.
Bentley Reed
>>129125109Boof!>>129125100Not one outburst from Hamlin even.
Caleb Ortiz
>>129125130And what trick would that be?
Kevin Wood
>>129125109>>129125095Deity of Control? What nonsense. Finitevus should be murdered and thrown off the Island. Fuck him.
Robert Powell
>>129125144Bullshit. It makes sense but it's still bullshit.
Owen Price
>>129125164Brute force is the best way to deal with him.
Luke Gray
I both love and hate how well Sonic and Dragon Ball Z mix. Both are so aggressively 90s in different ways. Not to mention the former takes shameless inspiration from the latter.
Dylan Barnes
>>129125177This will be addressed (sort of) later but yeah, a Metal Sonic is the deity of science. Just roll with it.>>129125157Oh hey, Locke. Sorry about what you'll see later on in this comic. You'll see.
Thomas Mitchell
>>129125109>I can give you any shape I wantDare you enter Finitevus's magical realm?
Ryan Moore
>>129125191Another easy one.>>129125180They kind of work if you deal with the wildly different power levels. This comic kind of has problems with that but it's not too bad.
Charles Johnson
>>129125164>Dr. Gero: What the hell is a Namek? Actually, I guess Dr. Fini would be Sonic's equivalent of Dr. Gero. ... Would that make Lien-Da the Android 19?
Tyler Phillips
>>129125208What's Mephiles doing here? He can do whatever he wants, that's what.
Ethan Allen
>>129125225Playing mind games, I see.>>129125221I see Eggman as a Gero and Frieza fusion in that he does none of the fighting and just leaves it to his creations to do all the damage but having Frieza's nasty habit of always coming back and being the long term antagonist.
Hunter Ortiz
>>129125251Mission complete!
Blake Price
>>129125265And Rage exploded and died. The end. So sad.
Joshua Ramirez
>>129125286Meanwhile...
Aaron Roberts
>>129125304MUH CHAOS EMERALDS
Aiden Perez
>>129125053Ah yes, time for more dimensional issues and Zone Cops NOT DOING THEIR JOBS>>129125100That's what happens when they're not surrounded by the usual idiots like Naugus and Max.
Jason Perry
>>129125053Let’s go
Ian Reed
>>129125321EGGMAN IS DEAD (this is a fan comic and he lasted quite a while)BUT THAT'S NOT THE END OF THIS FIGHT
Ian Miller
>>129125333Awooga!>>129125323They took one look at this and was like "fuck that" and went to get some zonuts.
Nathaniel Mitchell
>>129125350Inb4 too hot for Holla Forums
Jace Butler
>>129125350Frieza would approve of this design.
Jayden Baker
>>129125164>Finitevus: NO! THIS ISN'T FAIR! YOU'RE NOT PLAYING FAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIR!!
Asher Cox
>>129125369Oh my!
Brody Campbell
>>129125386Even the saiyan OCs are struggling against this new form!>>129125363Noooooooo!
Nicholas Edwards
>>129125407Oh right, they can go super whenever they want.
Asher Wood
>>129125423>the black hedgehog who was inside mePhrasing!
Easton Barnes
>>129125440Even in death, Eggman cannot escape the fat shaming.
Joseph Bennett
>>129125177Finitevus got wrecked.
Luis Morris
>>129125455Yes, keep beating it up. I'm sure it won't come back from this stronger than before.
Nathaniel Ramirez
>>129125474Or it could be repairing itself while everyone is waiting around.
Isaiah Thompson
>>129125251Why have three of the seven big Chaos deities been evil dicks? Where are the Ancient/Neo Walkers To deal with this shit?
Sebastian Gutierrez
>>129125484>over 9000 referenceIt was inevitable.
Nathan Nguyen
>>129125499Good idea, Sally. They need to kill the bad thing now.>>129125485The artist has made some changes to the characters and what their roles are. Wait until you see Sonic's parents and Knuckles' father.
Elijah Russell
>>129125304Fucking Saiyans man.
James Cook
>>129125517That's what I keep saying! Destroy it now!
Daniel Collins
>>129125333>Eggman fucking diedWell, he was the big bad for 9 whole chapters so I'm cool with it.
Jordan Bennett
>>129125530>saiyans letting sonic and the gang to finish thingsAwfully sporting of them.
Ryder Jenkins
>>129125544Bunnie getting an upgrade.>>129125541Yeah, he had a good run.
Levi Reyes
>>129125559It's time for the Sonic and Shadow Show.
Ethan Perez
>>129125407Finally, somebody strong enough to fight these Saiyans.
Easton Mitchell
>>129125572ENTER SUPER SONICENTER SUPER SHADOWENTER 10 MINUTE BREAK
Chase Thomas
>>129125423>I have made a miscalculation
Benjamin Perez
>>129125455Eggman gets no respect, not even after being killed.
Isaiah Hughes
>>129125484These Saiyans are way too genre-savvy.
Carter Foster
>>129125590One arc ends and another begins. Also, we have four chapters left. So you know what that means.>>129125667>me and my bots get no respect>what did frieza do that we neglect
Jack Nelson
>>129125559Been playing KOFXV recently and I can't help but think of Bunnie as Maxima
Zachary Morris
>>129125724Fight!
Zachary Johnson
>>129125740Oof!>>129125725She gets two lasers... on her chest.
Nathaniel Watson
>>129125499Took 10 chapters, but it happened.
Robert Clark
>>129125754Missing something?
Ryder Perry
>>129125667>Zone-1982>Ivo Dangerfield: I tells ya, I get no respect! No respect! I went out one night, asked a cabbie "to take me where the action is"! He takes me to MY house!!
John Jackson
>>129125530Tails is really fucking casual about the threat of impending planetary destruction here.
Anthony Parker
>>129125767Must be nice to go super and just casually disassemble stuff.
Hudson Taylor
>>129125778Uhhhhhhhh...
Samuel Robinson
>>129125777As many times he's been involved with Zones getting blasted, he's probably used to it.
Isaiah Butler
>>129125795Bad robot hand! Leggo!
David Miller
>>129125544It's also oddly nice that they were willing to just outright destroy it instead of fucking around and finding out. These Saiyans have pretty strong morals.
Robert Young
>>129125811youtu.be
Jaxson Stewart
>>129125828Is this the trigger for Antoine to go super?!>>129125827Such nice saiyans when they're not trying to kill each other.
Ian Wilson
>>129125854I will always appreciate thicc Sally.
Landon Bennett
>>129125868Time to learn more about the saiyans.
Anthony Bailey
>>129125868Sally of course got thick by sitting on her ass all comic
Brayden Hall
>>129125095Best boy!>>129125207That only makes it hotter and you know it.>>129125369A Frieza gizoid, or a friezoid if you will. It is pretty cool though.
Julian Gutierrez
>>129125888Man, nobody likes magic. It's not all bad!
Austin Reyes
>>129125868Sally really should cover that up. But also:>a Saiyan interested and knowledgeable about techWhat is even happening
Jason Morales
>>129125904Uh oh! What's the very anime-y darkness coming from Rage?>>129125892>Best boy!And he'll have some more appearances as well!
Ryan Butler
>>129125925I don't like the sound of this!
Anthony Gray
>>129125945Gotta trick out Bunnie's new arm!>>129125889Yeah buddy!>>129125920>What is even happeningSaiyans do need to branch out from being hobo fight autists.
Lucas Allen
>>129125945So the monkey has SpaiceAids, who could've guessed?
Jeremiah Jones
>>129125964Woah, new OCs!Three chapters left!
Angel White
>>129125982That skirt makes it look like Nicole has thicc, wide hips. I approve.
Josiah Howard
>>129125904Conductor, most of the magic users in Sonic tend to be evil.
Charles Nelson
>>129125999WITNESS METhese saiyans all being weird. Also cute of Knuckles wanting to bond with a fellow echidna. And no, Knuckles isn't the only echidna, not including Enerjak or Finitevus.
Landon Stewart
>>129126035Gotta put that belt on. Feeling extra naked without it.>>129126010Those magic abusers give honest magic users a bad name. Remember Merlyn or Athair?
Matthew Flores
>>129126054Amy wants to go shopping with her new tomboy girlfriend.
Wyatt Richardson
>>129125999Witnessed.>>129126035>Bartin is a military autist>Zuki questions the lack of clothing when nobody else is wearing anySaiyans are autistic confirmed.
Chase Ward
>>129126067>tower was replaced by a dbz looking ocTowerbros...
Dominic Martinez
>>129126085Suddenly a spirit OC!
Angel Peterson
>>129126067>Also Brolix is cripplingly autistic, like me, so we should get along fine
Austin Lopez
>>129126104So there's a bunch of evil energy that needs to be dealt with. Super wants to have the mortals deal with it.
Grayson White
>>129126116So of course the deities are going to go with that. Also, ENTER LUPE!
Jace Jones
>>129126085I… think Towers is going through a severe midlife crisis, and rather than buying a sports car like the rest of us he’s opted to go for an… extreme makeover.
Lucas James
>>129126067You just want another boy on the team, Shadow. Don't lie. I'll allow it, but only because I like these Saiyans and think they've been a good influence on you lately.
Kevin Martin
>>129126132ENTER ANOTHER OC
Joseph Watson
>>129126149The wolves, including the OC wolves, are pretty close to the deities of past (Chaos) and future (Enerjak).
Josiah Cox
>>129126162Enerjak with the good news.
Grayson Brown
>>129126174Someone wants revenge!
Cameron Howard
>>129126174Keep it succinct, Jackie
Gavin Hall
>>129126191Everyone's getting an upgrade! Even Nicole!
Nicholas Lopez
>>129126104>Antoine removed all his fancy clothing to go full nude>>129126116Super is a dick, as usual. Even Finitevus is nicer as a god.
Owen Stewart
>>129126207ENTER SONIC'S MOM NOT-BERNADETTE>>129126199tl;dr You all fucked
Kayden Harris
>>129126224ENTER SONIC'S DAD NOT-JULESENTER FINAL 10 MINUTE BREAK
Hudson King
>>129126174Why does that one wolf look like Zero?Nice of Enerjak to give such a short doomsday prophecy though.
Hudson Brown
>>129126191>that bitch AmyWhat do you have against Amy, Fiona?
Ian Johnson
>>129126287This comic came out before Forces. Looks like Sonic Team's got some 'splainin' to do!
Christian Ward
>>129126233The final stretch! Two more chapters!>>129126300They kind of clashed in the comics before Fiona got with Scourge.
Zachary Lee
>>129126362Getting that new arm!
Anthony Green
>>129126374Reminder that Daft Punk is still dead
Grayson Lopez
>>129126374Everyone's starting to gather to see how this works out.
Camden Clark
>>129126392Shoop!
Luke Davis
>>129126412Rouge already generating friction with the newbie.
Anthony Russell
>>129126412>speak of the devilWell Nicole IS a demon. A semen demon
Nathan Edwards
>>129126425Enough arguing, Omega demands violence!>>129126391RIP
Jonathan Garcia
>>129126233OH GOD, HE'S EVEN MORE OF A HIMBO THAN EVER BEFORE
Landon Brooks
>>129126445Sonic didn't dodge her this time.>>129126434A digital dick draining demon.
Blake Taylor
>>129126434Closer to an actual demon in GOTF But still a semen demon as well.
Robert Kelly
>>129126468FEEEEEEEET>>129126452He looks like he gets into bar fights and hits on women until his wife hits him on the head and drags him away.
Henry Murphy
>>129126483Fini with the hookup.
Logan Jones
>>129126425Rouge, he could literally break you in half. Rouge what are you doing
Noah Ramirez
>>129126497Haha, good luck mortals. Hope you don't all die.
Landon Davis
>>129126483>feetFUCK WE AVOIDED THEM FOR SO LONG
Josiah Hill
>>129126512Here's the new big bad!>>129126506>Rouge, he could literally break you in halfYou're just promising her a good time.
James Brooks
Finitevus working to save Möbius feels weird and wrong
Luke Thomas
>>129126529youtube.com
Alexander James
>>129126529EEEEEEEVIL!>>129126524Bunnie and her naturally barefoot self has made it happen a few times already.
Colton Butler
>>129126546In fairness, he believed he was saving the planet in Archie. He was just...very enthusiastic about "purging" it first.
Alexander Sanchez
>>129126562LOL later losers!>>129126546He's not interested in the planet getting nuked so it's a step back from his usual "kill everyone" goal but he isn't being too nice since he's helping Scourge.
Kevin Torres
>>129126581So Super draws out an evil version of Momack and leaves with him, leaving the original Momack behind. So there's two of him.
James Martin
>>129126604ENTER KNUCKLES' DAD NOT-LOCKE
Adrian Mitchell
>>129126623Look at all those silhouettes! And we have one chapter left!
Andrew Scott
>>129126604Super really is the most evil out of the deities. Completely amoral. Makes you wonder why they even let him stick around.
Jordan Foster
>>129126623He looks like a weak cuck
Ryan James
>>129126636Those are some interesting shoes, Lupe.
Bentley Walker
>>129126656Even more EEEEEEEEEVIL!>>129126638Because he's held in check by Finitevus. That doesn't sound much better.
Kayden Rivera
>>129126668Two Rages?! Nani?!>>129126643Says the divorced guy.
Connor Richardson
>>129126684What an interesting costume.
Nathaniel Young
>>129126700You're all saiyans, this should be heaven for you. Goku would be so pumped for another world ending threat.
Colton Turner
>>129126717ENTER MAMMOTH MOG--- oh...
Jordan Brooks
>>129126739>be immortal villain>after losing a bunch of times, just retire and run a casino knowing you'll outlive almost everyone>some evil oc barges in and starts beating on youShits rough yo
Andrew Barnes
>>129126739>this is for touching all those kids!
Luis Phillips
>>129126759Meanwhile, Not-Metal is just... sitting somewhere...
Hunter Peterson
>>129126636Naugus, Snively and what I assume are the Hooligans are the most easily identifiable. Don't know about the rest.
Henry Green
>>129126773He's dissociating
Robert Green
>>129126773Why does he look like Metal Sonic? Don't worry about it.>>129126762Poor Mammoth. He said he was sorry. I think.
Jaxon Johnson
>>129126787Just sitting around and eating and gods just appear like it's nothing.
Kevin Williams
>>129126795ENTER NAUGUSNot off to a good start.
Wyatt Gomez
>>129126811Oh no, he's fast!
Ryan Foster
>>129126823>not a giant feral hedgehog or human saiyanBOOOOOOOOO
Carson Rodriguez
>>129126836Thanks for the explanation but we only got a couple pages after this.
Ethan Ross
>>129126717That's because Goku (and Vegeta) are retards, Conductor.
Cooper Torres
>>129126849Poor Rotor!
Jaxon Perez
>>129126739Deserved for all the child mind rape, you creepy pedophile.
Brody Roberts
>>129126866And that's it! This series hasn't updated since 2016. But I have one more mini story to post.>>129126853Sometimes being a little retarded is necessary.
John Powell
>>129126884This scene looks familiar but I don't remember it having Sonic characters. This is The End of Chris Thorndyke by Kaminyu.deviantart.com
Alexander Myers
>>129126884>DARK DARK RAGE DARK EVIL MURDER DESTROY MURDER
Elijah Ramirez
>>129126773>tainted beyond what I have ever seenFunny joke given your history, Mogul.
Thomas Ross
>>129126898I know there's a lot of Chris haters and some defenders so it's funny to see the comments for this. The artist definitely had to deal with complaints over it.deviantart.com
Bentley Thompson
>>129126811Hey, at least he's responding to you more than Geoffrey ever did Naugus!
Caleb Brown
>>129126914Sonic Adventure 2 Dark Team replacing the heroes is a fun touch.
Nolan Bell
>>129126930>die, chrisNo, no, that's German for "The, Chris".
Jack Torres
>>129126950I'm sure Chris is fiiiiiiine!
Robert Nguyen
>>129126971Just a flesh wound.
Zachary Sanchez
>>129126971we finally got a happy ending this time
Julian Rodriguez
>>129126984That's it for Chris as well as the thread for tonight! Tomorrow at 9pm EST we'll do another night of various comics.
Josiah Baker
>>129126914>>129126898>>129126950>>129126971>>129126930>>129126984>>129127004best part of the storytime
Christian Rogers
>>129126836At least we can kind of extrapolate what their human forms look like based off the Oozaru.
Michael Rogers
>>129126950It's been years since I've seen this.Shadows face cracks me up everytime
Aaron Kelly
>>129126898>>129126914From heroic Saiyans to feet to violent child abuse, this ride has it all!
Samuel Russell
>>129126898>>129126914>>129126930>>129126950>>129126971>>129126984>>129127004BASED BASED BASED
Charles Cooper
>>129127004The list is manageable and we're going to knock off quite a bit tomorrow. I will also say that finding some good and ironically good comics is getting harder and harder.
David Scott
>>129127004>>129127090Hedgehogged was an enjoyable romp which was unexpected and Chris being brutalized is seemingly something that unites the entire fandom. Overall, a pretty good two-day comic and a much shorter closing story.>The list is manageable and we're going to knock off quite a bit tomorrow. We'll just have to add more before then.
Cooper Reed
>>129126914I'm indifferent to Chris.
Jayden Nguyen
>>129127125Glad you enjoyed it. I know this story wasn't to everyone's liking but I think there were some good ideas and the art was pretty good. I just wish the writing was better and certain character choices were different or not changed from the Archie comics.
Lucas Hughes
>>129127192That's probably the nicest I've seen anyone treat him.>>129127226Yeah, it was clear Hedgehogged wasn't as engaging for some like a couple of the other stories, but it was still pretty good. The only complaints I really have is that the writing is a bit weird in places and like you said, a bunch of Archie characters get changed in various wsys.But it has the best version of the Council so far, so I'm willing to let it slide.
Oliver Foster
>>129127090>The list is manageableHa! I suppose it's at least stabilized since it's just growing at the same rate we finish comics off.Really enjoyed Hedgehogged, despite the weird name and less engaging plot. It was refreshing to see the council actually work together, and the oc's weren't on the nose, especially since they were DBZ characters who are inherently more powerful than Sonic characters.The Chris comic was pretty funny, I might not hate him, but I certainly understand why others do. I'm still convinced he's a past version of Eggman though (same hair and eyes, genius scientist grandfather, similar clothes style, absolute obsession with Sonic). It would've been cool if the portal Chris made in season 3 to get back to Sonic instead sent him back in time and scrambled his brains so he only remembered his obsession with Sonic.
Cameron Reed
Chris Thorndyke > Sally Acorn
Xavier Torres
>never watched Sonic X>ask youtube to give me a rundown on Chris>Chris Thorndyke is the most useless sidekick ever>Chris being the worst sonic x character for 4 minutesIs Chris just a cursed name for Sonic?
Henry Miller
>>129127279I'm going to chalk it up to the artist probably being young and way into the idea of putting their saiyan OC's in Sonic, meshing all three of their interests into some epic story that seemed better in their head. This is why I get hesitant when I see too many OC's. These aren't bad but they're not as good as Stripes and Jolt.
Oliver Myers
>>129127333>I'm still convinced he's a past version of Eggman though (same hair and eyes, genius scientist grandfather, similar clothes style, absolute obsession with Sonic).That was probably something during production. Maybe Sonic X originally had something like Sonic going back in time and meeting Eggman as a kid unknowingly and becoming friends with him.
Jayden Rivera
>>129127371It's too bad they never had the guts to put it in the final show. It really recontextualizes Chris from needy kid the producers added to chase trends, to a Sonic fan so obsessed he ends up becoming a villain. Not sure how they'd handle the SA2 adaption, since Gerald would be the grandfather of both of them.It really is a shame that they always shy away from Sonic and Eggman's origins (except bizarrely, in the movie). I know Iizuka wasn't happy with the implication that Sonic was the real ultimate lifeform raised on the ARC with Maria, but at least give him something! I'd even be happy with them making a Green Hill village in IDW that serves as a home base. He doesn't even need an explicit house, but surely his fanmail gets delivered somewhere.
Jordan Kelly
>>129127693Yuji Naka once said Sonic and Eggman's first conflict occurred on Sonic's home Christmas Island. That's the closest thing you'll get to an "origin" of those two.
Cooper Baker
>>129127362Yeah, I can see what you mean. Personally, I'm fine with them since for all that there are a lot of them, they don't totally take away from the Sonic characters and cast and still LOOK like they fit into the universe. For most of Hedgehogged, it's really Archie (and one Fleetway) Sonic characters + some OC's and it stays like that up until the end. Its even Sonic characters who ultimately end Eggman's final legacy, so its not as though the OC's totally steal their win either. It's just that there's a lot of them and they're not quite as developed as some of the others we've seen on the Ride. Still better than Bleak though.Ironically, this story is probably better than the OTHER Dragonball crossover which more or less uses purely Sonic and Dragonball characters. Mostly because there, the Dragonball elements totally overshadow any of the Sonic ones, basically just making it into the Goku Show: But Furry.
Logan Jones
>>129127350Chris in Sonic X really gets recontextualized when you consider he was most likely going to be made into a past version of Eggman but it got scrapped before the final production. I seriously think giving him more development than just "lonely rich kid who desperately wants to be Sonic's friend" would have salvaged Chris as a character.
Caleb Phillips
On the note of the Saiyan-Mobians though, I'm claiming Bartin for the twink collection and personal use
Logan Murphy
>>129127818Chris should've just been a regular kid. Not a rich boy. Chris was supposed to be the self-insert kid for the viewers, but I don't think Sonic fans are considered rich.
Alexander Powell
>>129127942I'm pretty certain the real reason Chris was made rich was so they could conveniently handmade him not going to school some days to good off with Sonic or explain away numerous crazy situations and conveniences by use of his family being absolutely loaded.
William Baker
>>129127693Honestly, it's surprising that the movie is the only piece of Sonic media right now that's actually TRYING to do any worldbuilding.
Jayden James
>>129125053bump
Cooper Howard
Someone was talking about Chris being a younger Eggman. What about an AU where he's Eggman's son?
Wyatt Wood
>>129128603Honestly? I can dig it. Sonic befriending the son of his archenemy? It could work. Helps that Sonic X Eggman is probably the nicest version of the character next to Boom.
Easton Hernandez
>>129128015Naaah cartoons don't have to explain any of that with money. They probably just picked one of the default appealing settings.
Kevin Gutierrez
>>129128909Fair, but we've already established that Sega has a very weird thought-process.
Cameron Cook
>>129128603How the fuck did Robotnik score?
Julian Kelly
>>129126898>>129126914>>129126930>>129126950>>129126971>>129126984>>129127004THAT MENACE SOMEONE ARREST HIM NOW
Carson Nguyen
>>129128603>>129128826>Eggman: "I forbid you from being best friends with that hedgehog!">Chris: "But dad, Sonic said he was going to take my on an adventure today!">Eggman: "No, buts! Go to your room! You're not coming out until you come up with an evil scheme! And it better involve Sonic being defeated!"
Grayson Long
Well?
Ryder Garcia
>>129129433... you have a point there.
Nathan Peterson
>>129129510Whoops Mr Jonas, I didn't take the cap off. We don't have a single incriminating photograph for the Bugle.
Jayden Russell
>>129129442Katella got into his pants.