I realize askin' Holla Forums fer help is generally not the brightest of ideas, but I was hopin' some of y'all might be able to help.
I was wonderin' if this here demonic lady would pass fer somethin' in the E to E 10 rating demographic, or if there's somethin' I should or could definitely tone down.
Maybe? I feel like she has to much cleavage, maybr cover up a bit more of her skin.
Ryder Cruz
Don't ruin your artistic vision like that, jesus christ Make the game you would want to play
To answer your question, it'd probably pass a 12 year rating
Connor Wood
This. Kill yourself if you're gonna ruin your own game because you wanna have a younger age rating.
Ryder Cooper
Not thicc enough.
Eli Carter
Your post reminds me of pic related. IIRC all Darkstalker games have a Teen rating by the ESRB. Perhaps the blood and violence add to this, but for the sake of helping you get a minimum rating, let's assume you won't hit E 10 with that design. You're begging the question here, why do you want to appeal to a younger demographic with that character?
Sebastian Parker
Kill yourself.
Dylan Cook
dont show her in the fucking cover, trailer, sneak peaks of your fucking game?
Jacob Reyes
Fuck off northener.
Noah Green
We ain't got time for no Yankee City slickers 'round these 'ere parts. Y'all better fuck off back to New York.
Carter Baker
I've seen stuff about that risque get lower than a T rating before, you ought to be fine. Cleavage is the only point of contention I can see.
Sebastian Clark
It's fine.
Brandon Barnes
I want to FUCK that succubus.
Nicholas Cook
This, do you draw porn OP?
Daniel Rodriguez
needs more Loomis
Ryder Baker
Are you trying to use as many ing words as you can just so you can use the apostrophe? Is this your gimmick?
Luis Reyes
This, but if you're specifically trying to write and design characters in that age bracket (for the story or whatever), I don't think a succubus, or one as obvious as that design, would pass as E to E10.
A succubus would be a mature character, but the way to get around that is trying to exaggerate her playful characteristics over her sexual ones. That might require re-imagining how the succubus should be viewed or designed. Consider child-friendly artwork approaches, or how characters in games for younger people are designed.
If I was looking to get closer to E to E10, without trying to redesign the character entirely, I'd probably change the art style of the character a fair bit. A smaller tail, less emphasis on the hips and thighs (wider waist, just a little), extend the bottom of the corset with a skirt, or change the corset into a dress to cover up the cleavage and shoulders a little without removing their presence. Finally I'd add some small horns, to piss off christians but also to make it obvious she's a devil / demonic character while still making the design appealing to a younger audience.
Tyler Lopez
OP is obviously a succubus trying to trick children into sexually imprinting onto succubi.
Lord knows that's what Morrigan did to me.
Ayden Price
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Jaxson Robinson
Sincerest of apologies, I just type the way speak. I don't intend on changing my mannerisms for your sake.
I draw some porn but I never post since I ain't that much of an artist, and I have minimal grasp on anatomy
Thanks mister, I appreciate the advice and will take it into consideration
Nolan Taylor
That's much better than imprinting on a fucking pony. Good luck OP.
Owen Collins
How can you have a literal semen demon that also dresses modestly enough to be called kid-safe? Is that even possible? Well, I dunno, but you can try reading this comic for inspiration: themonsterunderthebed.net/
Jonathan Reyes
So do most 2d porn artists.
Alexander Flores
This is the best advice you could possibly receive.
Gabriel Richardson
itt we justify censoring chinese moving board games like NISA or Nintendo does. Good job Holla Forums!
Kevin Russell
Who are you quoting
Jack Cruz
Reminds of the villain in Battletoads. I think you'll be fine.
Michael Bell
Except everyone is telling the extremely faggy OP to not do that. Read the fucking thread.
Brandon Lee
Hey, if I were keepin' with artistic vision, the costume would be topless, however, certain conditions and restrictions prevent me from doin' what I wanna do
Ethan Bailey
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Josiah Reed
Are you retarded?
Half the responses are saying that it wouldn't pass and that he should do things like change her personality, cover up her breasts, or try to hide her.
Anthony Kelly
It's up to the Kikes at ESRB, not us. And even they are wildly random and spotty with their ratings. Throw them something worse as bait and they will totally miss other infractions and just focus on having you resubmit without the bait.
Just don't make the bait so stupid you can't really use it, because they might just fuck up and give you the rating wanted, forcing you to keep the content intact.
Isaiah Ward
I think it'll hit E 10 at most. Not like ratings matter much nowadays. You'll be good
Northerners leave The south should have won
Owen Flores
He was localized by the folks behind that one Dragon Quest game.
Ryder Moore
Which is true.
OP is trying to design around that constraint. He wants opinions on how to do it. What artwork he's already done is fine, but for the goals of meeting an age restriction, it wouldn't pass as E to E10. Nobody's telling him to delete or change his original concept. As art, that stands by itself.
He alone wants to create a new design, that would be accepted in the E to E10 bracket, that deviates from the original.
Levi Mitchell
OP, check out the Shantae games, they're E10+ and at least as risqué as your design in the OP, just make sure her outfit isn't too obviously lingerie (put studs on it or something, make it look fantasy-ish)
Benjamin Carter
Will the character have closeup shots, or will she be a small sprite on game screens?
If it's the later, you have a lot of options. Giving her an outfit with a lot of side nudity can allow you to hide it from ESRB using her arms, and only showing it for a brief moment in her animations so kids can go crazy trying to figure out what she's wearing.
If there are more close up shots, what you can always do is have her tail wrap around the uncovered part of her wasteline. This way kids who are unfamiliar with outfits like that will wonder if the socks connect with the leotard, or something. they'll have a lot of questions about the crotch area without you drawing attention to it. From an adults perspective it will be less lewd than if the area was exposed., but from a kids perspective it will be so much more lewd.
Brody Roberts
He's a Southron and proud of his heritage! kek
Parker Walker
Except that it doesn't matter at all if it would pass or not and he shouldn't consider changing anything about his game until he gets an official evaluation stating otherwise. The whole act of asking is bait to show the hypocrisy in the general population of Holla Forums's stance on game ratings and content, as proven by previous posts saying it wouldn't pass.
Christian Diaz
Well I'm from Texas, boyo, and I ain't ashamed of it. It is what it is. Looking down on "rednecks" is the kind of shit upper-middle-class hipsters do from their glass towers in big cities. It's the behavior of the regressive left.
I can kill a deer with ammo I hand-loaded. I can skin that deer and clean the rifle afterward. I can catch, clean, and cook a fish with the stuff in my pockets. I can change my tires, oil, timing chain, and replace my heads without having to pay a mechanic. I can rebuild my PC from scratch and I can even fix your Macbook when you spill your $7 latte on it. Contrary to what you probably expect, I've got a real live natural-born vagina. And despite all that, I reckon I can hold my own in conversations about the weebest shit imaginable.
What've you got to be so proud of?
William Barnes
Calm down, or else.
Joshua James
don't spill your latte, now
Tyler Adams
if the art weren't so fucking shitty it wouldn't be a half-bad comic honestly.
Daniel Scott
you for real? because nothing is hotter than a girl who knows her shit.
Robert King
MAKE IT ADULT
Matthew Wilson
www
Adam Baker
Yeah, yeah, pipe down. I just brought it up to point out how fucking sad these nu-male clowns are.
Sorry babe, but this bad bitch is blissfully bound. Better luck next time. (You didn't really think someone like me would be single, did you? Besides, I'm probably old enough to be your aunt.)
Leo Sanders
That doesn't make sense.
Blake Garcia
It does when you fuck your cousins.
Benjamin Gonzalez
Yeah, I knew you were gonna say that. I figured it was a good middle ground between "mom" and "sister." The thirties are a weird age, man. Too young to be old and too old to be young.
Luke Rogers
CHROME AND SHINY
Tyler Sanders
No that I dont believe you but post proof , preferably tits pls.
Brody Hernandez
tits or GTFO
Dominic Thomas
You know the rules. Tits or GTFO.
Sebastian Brooks
I don't know, I'm not on the fucking ratings board. But really, as long as you don't hit M, you should be good for selling to kids.
Matthew Stewart
You're going to have to prove that claim of yours there missus.
David Cruz
Flat chest, no nipples. Anything else goes.
Carson Reed
Pretty sure call of duty has had M for almost all the games, and even normalfags are highly aware of the infestation of 12 year olds.
Nathaniel Mitchell
Don't listen to this madman, the succ needs to be thicc.
Andrew Diaz
You gotta prove you're an hero first
James Harris
hey, thanks for posting that. I was looking for it.
You ain't even read your own image, kid. I ain't trying to get nothing out of you fags. When I want a favor then you can ogle my flat chest.
Also it looks like OP abandoned the thread.
Kayden Bell
Okay, monkey's paw, does this girl happen to look like King Kong's asshole or is it a lie?
With regard to the character design though, honestly, even if it was T, kids would buy it. Reminder that Melee was T because redeads might have had blood. Or something.
Julian Myers
Wonder why that happened.
Grayson Bennett
he was gone before I got here, don't go blamin' me mein fuhrer
Owen Cruz
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Camden Gray
In the timeless imageboard tradition: tits or GTFO.
A farmer from a mother country of polacks here. You don't impress me at all. Ever tried changing a tire on a wheel taller than yourself?
Connor Perez
Just for age rating. Any other context and I'd agree.
Ayden Fisher
This thread is getting intense.
Jayden Fisher
I feel like that would be a similar process, just with a fuckhuge way to support the tractor while you undo and wheel the tire away.
Brody Sullivan
Either way, if you don't post your tits, it's clear that you are a dude. Must be why you have such a flat chest after all. Go back to /cuteboys/ you self-RPing faggot.
Adrian Harris
Hey, instead of picking a fight, you oughta recognize we're on the same side. What kinda vehicle you got that uses wheels that big, anyway? Even our tractor tires are only 38".
man, did I end up on Wizardchan somehow? I wasn't looking for attention, check . You sad bastards are so desperate for a whiff of pussy or a glimpse at some tits there's been like ten posts about a throwaway line I added for emphasis. C'mon, stop embarrassing yourselves. I can only cringe so hard.
Joseph Sanchez
Got the case right on my desk, and it got slapped with a T for Comic Mischief and Mild Violence, and they probably only did that because the E10 rating didn't exist until 2005 or so.
On an unrelated note, I have to give OP credit for trying to peg his audience before making gaem. Good on you, wherever you are now.
M rating doesn't stop underage, but literally nobody likes the sort of underage b& that plays M-rated games.
It's a strange game, the only winning move is not to play.
Brody Lee
Failure as a human being.
William Cox
Make the thighs a little bit more thicc.
Cameron Carter
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Jack Smith
tits or gtfo
Jose Bailey
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Easton Jones
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Carter Garcia
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Isaiah Sanders
Then why even say you're female in the first place?
You're next line will be: Yeah, no fuck off you dipshit. Even IF you are chat you claim to; why even come here? If you can do all that, be married, and have a job, what the hell you doing here? Get out normalfag.
Indeed. I shouldn't have played in the first place but i'm already here, and thirsty faggots keep lapping this shit up thought like they're getting actual female interaction. I assume they're newfags.
lmao
Juan Foster
fucking eurofags
Nathaniel Bennett
Niggers aren't welcome here.
Logan Cook
fuck off, low T
Henry Ramirez
inb4.
Blake Torres
Get out
Benjamin Davis
The least you could do is spell "thick" right.
Michael Long
Hillary voter detected.
Zachary Garcia
I could of but I also could care less tbh.
Tyler Sullivan
says the thirsty faggot hahaha! you've got more posts replying to me here than anyone. I'm sorry you hate your mom, bro. Better luck next life.
And I hang out here because I like video games. I work at home; we (my family) stable horses for people who go on vacation and shit.
Christian Ortiz
Since this thread is beyond redemption now
Leo Perez
This is some nineties fucking bait right here holy fuck. Like this is something you'd get on a forum for a WoW guild.
Had me untill this point. 3/10 please try harder next time
Alexander Gomez
man, I just don't have the energy for it. I'm supposed to be working right now anyway. I really just stopped in this thread to post but it pisses me off when I see people making fun of southern folks and that's why I made that long post earlier. I'm gonna head out now, y'all have a good one.
Ryder Campbell
Gotcha. I take it you don't do any showing, either? Barrel racing? It's a pretty good workout. I just wish the people around my area were less scummy.
Jack Ward
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Asher Smith
get some thicker skin buttercup. I didn't poke fun at your accent, because I couldn't give a shit about it. I live in the south, though not as far as you claim to live. But if you can't handle you accent being poked fun at by others, i'd hate to see you flip when someone says your shirt looks dumb or doesn't thank you properly.
John Jenkins
Texans confirmed insecure faggots. Also, their shit isn't even that big Suck Alaskan dick, Texas
Nicholas Ramirez
Thinking of it, would a lack of clevage w/ thighs still work, or would that still be too far? After all, since when have the general public/morality police given two shits about thighs?
Then I came to the realization that this could potentially be a non-issue since the ingame graphics would be small 32 by 32 sprites
Apologies fer wastin yer time and making a new porn dump, and thanks fer yer efforts
Ian Bennett
Lose the human head, make is a skull or something. They won't change the ratings if it's not human, right?
Grayson Ortiz
I'm calling bullshit. Even the front wheels on my largest tractor are bigger. Actually, the rear ones reach to my eye level. The only thing I own that has them bigger than my height is my self-propelled forage harvester. Truth be told, I don't look forward to getting a flat tire there. I wouldn't even try changing it without someone helping me.
Bah, shooting deer. We have a local quota of 80 boars to remove this season. I don't think we'll manage to fulfill it on our own.
Samuel Reyes
Rednecks are only marginally better than niggers: they celebrate their lowlifes, and we should not do the same.
Jaxson Lewis
Anyone else see how SJWs have been appropriating terms like 'y'all" on occasion? They keep ruining shit for everyone.
Dylan Green
its all up to how much you suck the cock of the PC thought-police and maybe tip-off the ESRB.