Lal

sage

HEH
Forgot to take off my bait flag :^)

impressive numbers

Improved.

And cue it becoming loss in 3… 2… 1….

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Which version is better?

yeah I was trying to do that but can't find a third character for the third panel

Much worse. Doesn't really convey that he gave up after seeing Ganon.

I think you're at loss here, user.
I didn't abort the plot or something like that, looks fine to me.