Its been awhile guys! I dont know if you remember me from last time i came i hopes we could make a comic...

Of course user! You didnt think we'd use Google forever did you? Welcome to the Holla Forums comic website :
commanderandcute.com/

Glad you like the name. Sorry about the rule34 but it was fun seeing everybody use characters created by Holla Forumslacks themselves for porn. When people ask the sauce, itll trace right to our website.

no, and people really need to get away from this "artstyle"
Holla Forums drawfags are supposedly pro white but HAVE to imitate gooks 100%. It's getting old.

This just proves that you're a loser.

I saved it cuz its png son. Also awooo was promised to be included in a Donny rally scene so it was on my mind. If you dont like the style tough luck because our artist is one hell of a Holla Forumslack that knows the board culture inside and out.

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all you can do is imitate gooks now
SHUTUP

Dont worry user, this girl should cheer you up. Meet Elizabeth Warren. Friends call her Liz, shitlords call her Faux-Cahontas, but this 100% pureblooded native says the spirits felt she's Spreading Bull. Most think she interpreted that wrong.

At the moment we do have a patreon page but we arent stressing donating at all. As a richfag producing the comic i feel the first few issues should be up to me for bringing to the fold. If others join so be it. I must make a good impression :
patreon.com/commanderandcute

And if you want to join our Discord and make suggestions then we are always free at :
discord.gg/ZeyBhAE

Until then, feel free to ask or suggest anything in regards to the comic. I'll be here.

Here I thought advertising was against the rules. Silly me, I guess.

looks good. post more pictures.

Too damn cute to be Warren.

Thanks! We'll be finishing Hillarys coloring and shade by tonight. Here's a pic of the school janitor to hold us till then. Hope you like.

Hey man, good to see you.

I was suprised when the discord went down, or was I just kicked out?

Reminds me a bit of Viscera Cleanup Detail, mainly the blood on his mop. The game is being a janitor cleaning up after some horrible events, blood and bodies everywhere.

Heya! Our admins kick people out after long periods of inactivity. Sorry. Please join back anytime.

good luck OP. dont pay attention to the jelly faggots.

Are you the dude who posted that Hillary/Warren concept art where they were qts?

This, Warren is an ugly passive aggressive shrew.

Yeah but Snat&Peach were little brats too caught up in the Holla Forums drawthreads to give a damn about giving me time to set everything up. They grew impatient anf left so any art like pic related from the first thread wont be used as concepts. Im glad we have what we have.

I don't browse Holla Forums so I have no idea who those people are.

This looks pretty good

This tbh fam.

r/ing upload to mixtape.moe

This is terrible, learn to draw westacuck piece of shit.

You're probably not going to lend credence to any criticism here, but if you must take away one thing from this thread, it's this:

OP, fire your artist immediately.

These silhouettes look nice, but literally everything else you have to show for your project looks like complete and utter ass.

Not only does this art style resemble retarded vector cartoon shit like Steven Universe (your nigger trio seem to be inspired off of the fat, useless trash can in pic related), but I find it incredibly odd that the only substantial work that has been produced so far has been these ugly chimps and various, numerous pieces of rule34 for them.
Speaking as a cartoonist I can ashamedly admit that I often have a bias to draw the waifus in my work more often than the others because I like to draw attractive women. With this in mind it strikes me as odd that you would have so much artwork of these three nigger whores, even stranger that you would draw so much art that deliberately fetishizes them. Who exactly is this art supposed to be for? You are writing a comic with a Holla Forums audience in mind, most of whom would be repulsed by the sight of three fat, naked nigger lolis. If this is seriously all your art team has to show for themselves, fire them immediately before they continue to project their bestiality fetish onto an unwelcome audience.

This guy did a much better job at portraying these characters as the repulsive nigglets they're supposed to be. It's not great, but it does a better job at telegraphing your intentions. The best way for a viewer to dislike or mistrust a villainous character is to make them ugly, and so far you have communicated the exact opposite attempt.

Your artist also made the mistake of drawing these characters nude, it demonstrates that they're not practiced in human anatomy at all.

This art isn't bad, just bland. There's nothing about this vector that I can use to judge this girl's personality or character beyond some genki kawaii uguu anime whore. I still don't think this artstyle suits your project, but whatever, it's your thing and you can do whatever the hell you want.

tl;dr your artist is probably an oil driller with a niggerloli fetish, is unironically using a lazy hackneyed tumblr artstyle, barely knows how to draw the human figure and probably isn't a real Holla Forumsack. I understand how difficult it is to find talented, unpozzed artfags who will work for cheap, but this is ludicrous. You could and should do better.

don't just fire your artists OP, ruin their careers.

This is technically child porn, under US law.

Come and get me copper

I love how Hilly looks in that one

Me and the team REALLY appreciate detailed posts like these thank you.
But we have to clarify that our artist is female and has no intentions of doing any lewd art. All the rule34 that has been produced has been by anons whose only characters done so far have been the triplets and warren. I guess warren is not that popular. Also our artist is well versed in Holla Forums culture and is a literal genius. She is practically an additional writer with how much knowledge of Holla Forumsisms she shows just through drafts alone. We swear she she will get better but at the moment we are appreciating seeing her blossom in the arts. Thank you!

Make them look more autistic if that's possible. More niggerly

user…

I hope you get terminal cancer.

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sage and report patreon advertising threads
also OP your comic is trash

Okay guys so after 9000 hours in paint i combined the two Mo'neyques

Is this better than both of them?

fuck off back to tumblr, and learn how to create real art faggot

I fucking knew it. The cringey SU style reeks of tumblr, not to mention the way you kiss your artist's ass just REEKS of white-knight beta cuckery. Have a little more respect for yourself.

Anyway, I can't help but agree with everything this user said.
Why in the fuck are you making flattering portrails of niggers in your comic? Some "literal genius" you got there OP.

Make the characters
1. Actually reminiscent of niggers, not these pseudo-anime abortions with the facial scructure of whites and darkened skin tone.
2. Have individual body shapes

I drew up some better versions for you, free of charge, unlike your "artist" who practically jewing you out of all your shekels for worthless tumblr garbage.

Bring this sketch to your vagina and tell her to do it or gtfo.

Honestly, the first one looks best to me if they need to look antagonistic. It's the eyes.

How about now?

We appreciate the art but we dont feel that all niggers are bad people with ghoulish features to mirror an evil soul. Through characters like Ben Carson we hope to show its libersl idealogies that truly bring out the beast in a black person.

For the record I actually like the description you gave for the character, I just think her character vector is bland-looking. Could use a pose that better telegraphs her personality, unless her personality was literally what I described. even then it still isn't great. it needs a clear line of action.

Skeptical. The material we've received so far doesn't demonstrate this. If she is as you say then I wouldn't mind hearing from her in this thread. If I heard the artist talking through her design process that might actually help with my interpretation of these characters. Obviously, blind impressions are more valuable than author impressions, but it's useful to know what the artist is going for in the event that they need their direction coached.

I appreciate that you're being civil when you don't need to be, but be aware that a peppy attitude doesn't bode well with the general tone around here. You sometimes come across as too clinical, like an estranged HR director rather than an actual human being.

I said before that Holla Forums was your audience, but treat Holla Forums as more as a focus group than a true audience. In this thread you've thrown some concepts at us to test our impressions, and this is a good thing–if you intend to represent Holla Forums with this project then do more of this. Treat us more as benefactors than customers; don't advertise to us, pitch to us, and heed our reaction. If you fail to reflect your demographic, the message of your comic will fail swiftly.

t. a guy who's been involved in chan projects before

Also,
You should understand why we're skeptical of this. I'm not saying it's impossible, but demographically speaking women are less inclined to side with a Holla Forums worldview. Some ideals like defiance of modernity and heroic masculinity are things I just can't see a woman portraying effectively, make sure you have actual human beings working on your project otherwise you will never capture Holla Forums.

SHOVE YOUR TUMBLR-TIER SHIT UP YOUR ASS

Don't worry, all of them are 3000 years old.

You get better results by making decisions based on the general rule than the exception.

Yeah, go fuck yourself and take your gay art with you.

I think i got it this time! Everyone r8

Once again thank you for the wellthought post! I'll ask if she's willing to get in here. But please note she did NOT do either these drawings. >>7062752 Those were just criticisms made by people in the form of edits. She also didnt draw any rule34. Ill see if she can stop by. If not she is busy. Be right back.

0/10

This user has the right idea. If you don't want to draw ugly characters because you object to portraying niggers in a negative light for some reason, then don't think of it that way. You are not writing Evangelion, where the generic facial nuance of the characters is made up for by the depth of their personalities and the substance of the material, you are writing a silly satirical cartoon about politics featuring loli caricatures of real people. It's ok to strawman the villains as being horrible monstrosities, that's half the fun. It also gives the characters something interesting about them if you plan to redeem them later, as it seems like you're considering. Creating generically designed characters in a work like this doesn't speak well about the merit of your artist and their ability to portray interesting cartoon avatars. It just seems lazy.

Also,
The group you're trying to portray here aren't yuppy middle-class negro gentlemen, but screaming, pillaging, irrational, potentially-violent black lives matter supporters. I'm just saying.

You only do the movement credence by portraying them as "attractively" as you are, which seems like a contradiction of the overall message to me. This is what I mean about how it doesn't seem like your artist is a real Holla Forumsack.

This shit is exactly what I'm talking about when I say clinical. Your tone here conveys outright passive-aggression and I don't get any impression that you actually absorbed any of the things I'm trying to tell you.
I'm not asking you to throw a tantrum and call me a faggot–nor am I asking you to agree with everything I'm saying–I just want to know that you're willing and able to have a real dialogue about criticism with your benefactors. If not, then let me know so I can know whether or not I'm wasting my time trying to reason with you.

She's not going to get any better with you sucking her balls constantly about how perfect she is and how much of a "literal genius" she is.

I can just imagine every time this lazy cunt spews out some bottom-of-the-barrel tumblr art like
you fucking fucks just showering her in glory and singing her praises.

This whole operation is cancer.

My artist should be here within the hour most likely. By the way I swear i dont mean to be passive aggressive its just by nature im not looking to pic fights over opinions when the seconds of my lifetime are already running out. I could die tomorrow m8. I am however glaf anons pit effort into suggesting good stuff for the comic, but i cant honestly say i will go with every one. i hope you understand.

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We "shower her with glory" not because we think her art is godtier or whatever. Far from. However we feel her CalArts-esque artstyle fits with the youthful school setting.

SFW? Kinda in a family situation right now for the next 3 days

user YOU UTTER RETARD

Do you even know what this MEANS?
I'll bet she introduced you to this phrase, didn't she?

It refers to the phenomenon of cannibalized artstyles culminating throughout history, starting with the old disney classics and slowly being dumbed down into a staler and staler form until it becomes the stupid Steven Shitshow grinning potatoface style we have today.

*It is the product of artists feeding on the artstyles of other artists rather than actually being inspired by real-life subjects.*

CalArts artstyle is a derogatory term that has been appropriated by art students, hipsters and tumblrtards to accommodate for their shitty, bland, uninspiring art.

You are contributing to the death of classical western figure drawing through your sheer negligence, and you dare claim to represent Holla Forums?

YOU'VE BEEN PLAYED FOR A FOOL
FIRE YOUR FUCKING ARTIST

Your either rusing us or you're a complete moron

Cease this project immediately and fuck off

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From what?

You dumbasses i didnt mean to literally say i could die tomorrow specifically. I meant time is running out for anyone alive.

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FUCK YOUR COMIC
FUCK YOUR THREAD
I SAID THIS BEFORE AND YOU DIDN'T LISTEN
DON'T COME BACK
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GET AIDS TUMBLRFAGGOT

SEROIUSLY, ARE YOU KIDDING ME!? TUMBLR IS ESCAPING CONTAINMENT AGAIN?

REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

DAY OF THE REEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

More contentiousness, that's good.

FUCK YOUR THREAD
FUCK YOUR (((COMIC)))
GO BACK TO CUCKCHAN WITH YOUR CUCK SHIT
BETTER YET GO BACK TO TUMBLR
BETTER YET HANG YOURSELF FROM THE NEAREST UTILITY POLE

I already commented on this kind of American style weeb shit in the original thread. I don't think it will change, op has hired teh artist and she can only pump out this kind of xeroxed, bland shit.

Some people may like it, but it won't fly with the target audience, here. It looks like butt, but I retracted my offer to help after realizing the story telling style would not fit the style I suggested. SO I can't say shit. But I will.

DON'T COME BACK OP
NEVER COME BACK

Your setting, characters, and story telling style do not fit your target audience, take that into serious consideration.

(this, pretty much)

/thread

You fucked up OP.

After reading this thread, OP you're a faggot trying to make some money off this community, you refuse to listen to what your readers(==US==) want, and you won't fucking change anything.

You're a stubborn faggot, you just made a new(permanent) enemy.
I have no faith that you will change, you can get another artist, I don't give a shit.
Go fuck yourself, you wasted money on a shitty vagina artistic with steven universe-tier skills and style(you're fucking tumblrite trash and destroying western art).

Every. Single. Fucking. Comic. We have, gets shit up by some faggot like OP.
It happened with the christ-chan ultra-jew/chink, and it's happening again with this stubborn fuck shit-head OP.

Allow me to re-iterate my hatred for you, and people like you

KILL YOURSELF YOU FLAMING FAGGOT

OP is a shill. Trying to market this as "the Holla Forums comic" while also promoting the loli porn of it.

Make no mistake, when Holla Forums gets in the news, it'll be called a den of pedos and this shit will be brought up as evidence.

THE DAY OF THE ROPE MARKS YOUR DEATH OP, PREPARE FOR THE POZZING
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This is the problem we face when we try to materialize in the real world, and why we've avoided doing so for so long. The alt-right is proof it's liable to being compromised.

What you just said was one of the most stupid and pretentious things I've ever heard. I tried to help you man, but I can tell you're shit out of luck.

Instead of an argument, have this shitty MSpaint retort. I couldn't help myself.

I thought I smelled pretensious tumblr tier faggotry, her we have it.

POZ'd little faggot.

You made your bed.

NOW LIE IN IT

Nice.

That really was one of the most pretentious things I've ever heard as well. His time must be WAAAY more important than we even understand. I mean what would we know anyway? We're only the people he wants to help him make a comic with.

Jesus, this guy is such a faggot. I could smell it before he even said anything stupid.

also, nice potato head in your smuggie, really new wave and calart of you

Fuck off you IP hopping shill.

I agree that the OP is a bit weird but your concerted effort to shut it down is far more suspicious.

You can spot people like him from a mile away. What always tips me off is the vaguely peppy, passive-aggressive and condescending gimmick they put on. Like some kind of cheesy advertiser trying to sell you something. When people act like that, that's how you know they're not really from around here.

Fortunately once you start probing them with common sense, it all falls apart.

It's too bad, too. His original pitch from a few weeks ago didn't seem that bad. Autistic as shit, sure, but vaguely promising. What is it about creative endeavors on the chans that attracts tumblrtards like flies?

thank you, it was painful to draw.

trips and you never come back

DEUS VULT
KEK HAS SPOKEN

BACK TO THE MURKY PITS OF SHITSKIN WITH YOU

>gets BTFO by someone who actually knows how to draw or at least is learning/fucking trying
toppest of keks.

oh shit, son

I never hopped IPs m8 someone else legitimately joined in on the fun. I'm on a fucking zogdroid tablet and am a complete newfag to the OS.

YOU ARE HEREBY BANISHED FROM Holla Forums

IF DUBS YOU MUST GO MAKE A COMIC FOR Holla Forums TOO

It just occured to me that you have to be pretty fucking desperate to beg for Patreon shekels on Holla Forums of all places.

Someone is out of options

I don't know, being liberals I guess they're naturally drawn to the arts.

This happens everytime really. That's why the only thing you can do is find a good group of guys to hang out with occasionally and screen like hell.

Projects, not even art ones will inevitably end up getting corrupted anyway. For example, Anonymous.

Our strength is that we haven't chosen to associate ourselves with anyone yet, we're our own entity and we will stay that way. As for organization, like I said previously. A ground up approach to it.

Yet you waste everyone's time with these failed Hitler dubs. Shameful.

if dubs you get banished to leftypol and proceed to kill yourself

THE DIGITS HAVE SPOKEN

beautiful, user. this faggot has to go back.

sick, I got his dubs.

I thought it won't get worse than the Malaysian drawfag's Christ-Chan comic. But it got.

the best part is, i actually did this stupid fucking thing where i channeled 'memes' from the sky before i did it because im bored as fuck

MEME MAGIC CONFIRMED

TOPPEST OF KEK
I COMMAND YOU KEK; GIVE ME MORE TRIPS

this is what happens when you command kek
:^(

So i read through the thread and i want to say I'm disappointed. We really did have yall's best intention at heart, but if we want to mass redpill actual tumblrites (unlike our artist you've assigned that faggotry to) then i suggest we stick with a style that is visually appealing and familiar.

You want me to stop being a public relations expert? Fine ill be the contentious faggot you wanna see. I think most of you mean well for your board like the guy making drawnout criticisms but the rest of you can suck my motherfucking cock and balls and enjoy it, you irrationally emotional piece of viscera and shit. By all means stay the contrarian asshats you are with no good fucking input whatsoever but ill let you know now this project is happening. Whether we take it to 4chan ( where they've accepted it gracefully archive.4plebs.org/pol/thread/84468172/ ) and leave it there or just advertise here in small degrees, this comic will exist with not a god damn chance in your useless fucking existence as antagonizing 2edgy4me kiddies that could be done to stop it. My only advice is you guys contest with us by making a comic suited to the style you feel is best. Until then all you shoukd do is chill the fuck out and trust someone you know in your heart just wants to use his own goddamn money for a goddamn good reason like goddamn OC production.

My artist wanted me to relay that CalArts isnt actually a good word to represent her work or whats she's going for, so that was bad on my part. Since the first pic (DonVsHills) was a quick sketch i had on me i figured she would venturr into the CalArts style but today when i asked she said a goal of hers was to bring back the traditionally western style as seen in the Chippette and Audrey pic. Trust us. We arent going to fuck up the main component to the most visual of fucking media a person can master. Just takes time.

About to head out but i want to say on behalf of the team both thank and fuck everyone here. What a piece of shit thread and you know it. Next time should be more productive when we dump issue 1. Until then just take this sketch our artist did. Should convey how ridiculous you guys are for being so mean over so fucking little. But oh well.

Niggers.

Is this some kind of reddit tier false flag?

This just looks like a bunch of moronic smut and nigger hate. It's not redpills. It's something the KKK on Jerry Springer/Howard Stern or something CNN might bring out and everyone would say "look at this ignorant hateful shit! White Nationalists are losers!"

I don't get it. The Shiiiiat meme was just that. A joke meme. This is an entire comic with real intentions so it's not funny, just stupid and ugly.

Why don't you make a redpill comic instead of "look I hate niggers and Jews!"

This is what a redpill comic looks like!

This is what a redpill comic looks like!

This is what a redpill comic looks like!

That's where it belongs… It's cringe 4chan garbage. The drawing is fine

All right BITCH game on. Watch fullchan blow your "/po/l comic" out the water. You're gonna an hero at all the money you wasted on your shitty fucking Mary sue artist. We'll even set up a thread to get us started today.

So long you super mad faggot!

This is what a redpill comic looks like!

This is what a redpill comic looks like!

I can actually use this and have on twitter.

where we start? Id be happy to sketch some characters up

Jesus, this was embarrassing.

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KILL THIS FUCKING THREAD

Well this thread turned into a Shit show . . .
I actually don't mind the art style

I'd knuckle punch that little cunt in the temple then stomp on her face

What the devil is going on here?

100 times THIS

PURGE THIS TRAITOR

BURN THIS COMIC

this thread, op and his porn, art and comic reeks of degeneracy in an impotent attempt to false flag us as pedos.
eat shit OP

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this is what happens when you think comic books are art

Did I say "Good"?
Or did I say not as terrible as you Sperging Faggots are making it out to be

Tumblr: the comic

Seriously, where the fuck do you think you are?

It's that bad, and so is your degenerate sense of taste.

Oh I had not seen this post yet.
YES please fuck off to cuckchan, this tumblr-tier bullshit doesn't belong here.

I understand everyone is giving this project shit because of the art style but had there even been anything revealed about the writing itself? Who cares if the art style is pozzed? What if they're planning on using the style to subvert lefist ideals and values? Just postulating ways the tumblr style could be a good thing actually

People who have self-respect.

hey op sorry i never came back

i had the "Donny gives a good mexican a job selling sodas around the play ground gives him a Tarp to keep him from getting a wet back idea"

maybe you remember idk glad to see you're Making Progress keep at it, id like to see the first few pages of the comic as soon as you can get the line work done

hey op, going to tell you the Truth, i think you actually had a pretty good idea, the comic would of been a fun and easy way to Get to the normies, but i guess ((((they)))) don't want that, keep on working on it bud i don't know why people here are being so hostile today its not normal i remember the last thread i guess its just the summer fags trying to be edgy a pol comic would be a great way to spread out memetic message out into the world i a nice Subtle way don't let the shills keep you down bro

Well it took 100 repeated sessions of ball busting to get us here, but it looks like you've actually submitted something of relevance regarding your direction and development. Finally.

For the record I'm sorry you've been dragged through the gutter in this thread. From your perspective you're putting in time and money to write a creative love letter to Holla Forums culture, and whether or not you have failed or succeeded it still sucks to be spit on for exerting your own resources into creative pursuits. That said, we are not reddit/4chan, and we are not going to sing your praises simply because you tried. We want to see the best out of our culture, and in this day and age unfortunately there's no room for coddling and hand-holding. That's how an entire generation of young men and women became overprivileged little shits. I'll leave you with this Whiplash quote to better understand this:

>"There are no two words in the English language more harmful than good job."

Also, make no mistake that you made your bed with your shitty PR and you deserve to lie in it.

Learning how to handle PR is always the biggest mess you have to deal with in chan projects. A great way to learn and grow is to get your ass kicked, and you've endured a lot of that in this thread. It sucks, yes, but you'll grow stronger and move forward because of it. Let it embolden you, not embitter you.

With that out of the way I'm going to put in one more effort to help you.

OP
If you still need help with pr, my post here still bears good advice: do not treat us as customers, treat us as friends. Do not advertise to us, pitch your ideas as if we are important creative consultants. Trust me when I say that I have experience with chan projects that have crashed and burned simply because the team couldn't spark an actual relationship with their chan benefactors. Nine times out of ten, it was because they chose to condescend and stand over everyone rather than humble themselves and respect the audience they've chosen to represent. Holla Forums is a noble beast–and when everyone in a thread is telling you something is a bad idea, you should probably listen.

It is very clear you are passionate about making this comic work, but if you're going to do this then you need to learn the virtue in patience. You are so eager to see things through that it seems you're unwilling to take any criticism or accept that things about your work need to be changed. A developer who refuses to modify any part of their work out of pride or pretentiousness is an inexperienced and immature developer. Accept that you are not going to create a perfect product on your first try. There are going to be rewrites and revisions, and ultimately there will probably be one thing you really like that just doesn't work, forcing you to scrap it.

If you do not heed what I'm telling you, you're just going to learn this the hard way later on.

Also, don't refer to 4chan for criticism unless you like creative stagnation. Receiving nothing but praise is actually bad for human creativity: it sends positive reinforcement for trying rather than finishing. Not to mention everyone on that website that might have been of substance moved to Holla Forums years ago.

OP'S ARTIST
Unfortunately "bringing back the traditionally western style" is exactly what the CalArtsfaggots think they're doing too. A bit of self-awareness about this doesn't actually go a long way. At the end of the day, despite your intentions, you're doing exactly what every other tumblr faggot thinks they're doing: "saving western animation." In the end, it all looks like exactly the same in-bred garbage everyone else is doing.

Now if you're using this tired artstyle as a way to subvert all the shitty CalArts faggotry that exists in modern cartoons, I would actually applaud you for the clever commentary (especially if it was only the children who looked like grinning potatofaces–the adults look like normal people.) From everything that I've been told, however, this doesn't seem to be the case. OP has described you as a literal genius. If this is the case, I can only be forced to assume you are invoking deliberate negligence in order to sink this comic. If not, then you need to shape up NOW before you irreparably ruin the project poor OP has invested so much autism into.

I've made some infographics to explain the gripes I have with your art, as well as an attempt to explain the importance of exaggeration when it comes to drawing cartoons.

When drawing faces, I encourage you to go look in the mirror and study how your features interact while making expressions. Note, for example, how the whole face seems to scrunch up when you're showing disgust or anger, and widen when showing happiness or surprise.
I also recommend you buy a few anatomy books and study how the body interacts with itself. It's essential in my opinion to have a basic understanding of human figure drawing before you can truly move on to drawing cartoons.

Good luck. If I have more to say, I'll say it.

I can't read your hand writing for shit.

Looks legible to me user-san. Not saying it's got style or neatness.

And I hope OP uses this thread as a lesson for future reference.

You fucking nigger it looks just fine.

user if you could join our Discord group id be more than happy to compensate you for your time. The project could really use your eye.

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I'll consider dropping by in a few hours.

I couldn't read a lot of it either. You're the worst. You can't be an artist and go "yall bunch a cocksuckers, fuck you, you're WELCOME!" It's just a shit comic. Get over yourself and get better! Fucking hick

Before you join you must know payday for everyone on the team is every first of the month via transactions through paypal. I hope this is alright.

Of course its a shit comic. I dont take pride in doing this fucking nigger loli infested trash not one bit. But i do take pride in the fact that i have the opportunity to make Holla Forums have a comic of their own someday and maybe even redpill normies through the artstyle we're going with. Of coure its a dumbass comic. The setting and even stories will always be silly, but the fact its OC for Holla Forums that most of 4chan took to accepting feels great. I wont have you niggers making me or my team feel down especially when we could be using our talents and money for other things. We're not asking for your respect. We just dont want you being an autistic fucking mess like :

I respect you a whole lot more now OP thanks. I thought you were uppity is all and yeah a Holla Forums comic by name alone will always be stupid but its worth the time if it has redpills to give your readers. good luck

We're not going with it. Die in a hole.

My thoughts exactly, thanks user.

Alright fam. Kill yourself. Im enjoying every second my team and our supporters are giving so unintelligent/unproductive criticisms are a waste of time in comparison. I feel bad for ya.

If you want normies/tumblrites to read your comic, keep the art style. For any other audience/purpose, change it.

Thats the main idea. We want to keep Holla Forums interested with hidden jokes like the ones on front page, hell we even once thought of naming our brand "Hollow Cost Comics (because its free)" but we figured it would do the world more good to teach them the way of the general Holla Forums mindset without all the shitposting.

(((my team)))

That looks so fucking awful. Just try different faces entirely. It looks like nothing has changed at all.

Fuck you OP and OP's Calarts slave artist.

I'll make my own comic, with hookers and black jack.

Please stop, the world does not need any more American moe-blob.

After looking over the pictures again, I believe you need to do a little research on how facial expressions work. Try looking in your mirror and making the stupidest fucking expressions you can, and then try drawing them. Look to old 1940s-1960s American cartoons for inspiration.

Don't forget to keep consistent proportions. Even if the proportions are stupid, such as long gorilla arms and tiny legs, make sure they stay the same for the character every time he's shown.

Take note of how the characters animate, how everything has implied lines. When Felix the Cat is going to hit something with a big hammer, his whole body is shaped like a C! Take a look at the pictures for an example of this.

Our artist is really thankful for this. Whenever you feel ready please head to discord.gg/kSH88 I'd love to have you as paid staff in the form of advice to the artist. Hell or anything else youre skill shows expertise in but our artist would appreciate your eye for detail im sure

Holla Forums doesn't want or need your shit comic
kill yourself

Well youre getting it anyway. Mods dont seem to mind my threads. Last one here was around 500 posts and my 4chan ones hit bump limit if i dont let them get slid.

My point being is you might as well stop telling me to stop and try suggesting ways a comic that represents your board's beliefs could better itself.

I ask this as humbly as i can, stop being edgy it isnt cool. Be productive.

Kill yourself.

Thanks for the bump you autist nigger.

fuck nvm lol

Good on you for providing constructive criticism instead of just being a cunt.

Am I in the right discord?

discord.gg/ZeyBhAE

Sorry thats the official Holla Forums Discord. I frequent both. Here is us : discord.gg/kSH88

As I refresh and continue to see these threads I just felt compelled to say what's already said a few times by others - kill yourself.

But I'm going to go one step further in this endeavor - and explain why I have this perspective despite being literally summerfag garbage and 3/4 pilled.

There's great work being done from people getting inspired from the successes of others (wikileaks, anons, etc.) in digging and finding information that has caused even the MSM to respond to it - this is what makes Holla Forums great. Developing memes and 'polisms' as you've said only exist to serve a purpose - and that's to accomplish the overall mission of MAGA and breaking down the dishonest system we have and reclaiming that dank kulture of our forefathers.

Anytime I've seen a polcomic thread - I've hidden it because it has no content in it whatsoever to further any agenda or make any real substantial changes/redpills to people. I've read some and it just screams circlejerk to me - whether it's weak political cartoons being pushed with board lore or whatever.

This is - to me - just another hand-wringing adventure in trying to rake money off of people by becoming an unnecessary middle-man. Essentially, however you paint this comic-strip to be, it's going to be broken down to: "remember when pol was right?" Or "Now the goyim know so shut it down LUL." Will there be any true OC that will come out of it and serve a greater good? I haven't found it.

Don't get me wrong, Ben Garrison edits/originals and the OC that anons have made on here are great examples of artwork/content that does good service towards something by pushing people to as I've stated before actually going out and being productive.

Until I see that in the first post of these threads - I'll just continue to hide them, sage them, and overall treat it as a moneygrab for lesser anons that can't into honest propaganda/OC.

In other words. Kill yourself.

I'm not saging this time out of respect, but yeah. Pic related.

Do you -even- know where you are right now?

Are you implying a Holla Forums comic shouldnt even be made because its not on par with other forms of redpill? No you faggot nigger how about you yourself kill yourself. Reread your post and tell me how smart you sound.

You've completely missed the point. We gain nothing by being insular and folding into a sekrit club like the NRx retards who do nothing except talk about how smart and enlightened they are. Ideally, there are threads to blow off steam at the frustration of dealing with the retardation around us. Let's stay in the background and not attract attention while still dealing in influence and propaganda. We keep our users and maintain an aloof attitude and the board culture comes from that combined with happenings that shape our content.

What you're doing is basically trying to make us into entertainment. The entertainment comes from situational humor, we're not fucking /tg/, our interests aren't fictional. Stay on cuckchan if you want to peddle your project.

Also, if you can't take criticism, you're in the wrong place.

I can take criticism but everyone asking me to kill myself over a sketch is ridiculous. Not very productive m8.

Alright that image made me laugh a little OP

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Nah faggot you quote me in full you nigger

posting this exploitable here for no reason

what did I say about never coming back?

Can I request any meme magicians fuse this pic of A.H. onto the blank?

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fucking retard

Even the proper, reasoned and intelligent criticism ITT you ignored and threw aside "actually muh vagina is great artist she does calarts".

I tried mayne

Just kidding photoshop had to update
There ya go bud

nice

Why haven't you killed yourself yet?

Looks good, user. I look forward to it.

Danke mein bruder

pic related

lol

So i can spite niggers like you tbh

fuck off we don't want it. take it to halfchan where it's shills shilling shills they might fall for your shit

hey op got an update from the artists on their stile

id like to see more Product pics if they've made any

made me post on a tablet because fuck Windows 10 and its data collecters
God damn it OP, should had lurked longer for some Holla Forums tier artists who know how to draw proper western styles, than this low-tier modern art nonsense I hate to see everywhere, it's the cancer that's ruining my life.
ASAP replace that fucker of an artist with someone like me or anyone else on /ic/, /art/ /loomis/.
THIS IS WHY I WOULD DESTROY ANY CUNTS AT DRAWING and make them cry because they lack the spiral logic's to see perspectives, depth correctly.
If I were to join cal-arts I'll rip and tear anyone because I know my shit and I always try my best as possible, all thanks to the chans.
If I want to(or not) I could work for hot pockets for this project of yours(basic concept's) OP, but you're still a faggot in my book.